Date: 26 Jan 2009 11:12 PM Title: Haunted
This is a fabulously unique story. I'm loving and on pins and needles waiting for me. Haven't read one I couldn't stop reading until I had to in awhile. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you. I always figured the angsty ones were the ones that people read with frequent breaks in between. So thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2009 11:04 PM Title: Push
I must say, I adore your writing style. It's fresh and catchy, flows evenly. You capture the different emotional levels of your characters very well. I also enjoy that you're not stoning Max and idolizing Alec. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the storyTechnically, I'm sure I stone everyone :) I do enjoy squeezing their flaws until they bleed. It's when they have no flaws that I begin to worry :p
Thanks again
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2009 11:43 AM Title: Haunted
This story is really good. I really like what you do with the characters. I like how they interact and how they fight. I'm not usually a fan of stories with other 09'ers but I'm really liking Jondy anyway. I think has to do with the way you introduced her. It is not too many people who put distance between Max and other 09'ers. It is really nice to see that here. I have always liked Mole being a good friend to Alec. With the time that he has been away I like that Max and Mole develop a relationship. I find their tactics to help Alec really interesting. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Hi. Thanks. That's a big compliment. I was hoping Jondy wasn't too overwhelming or too "convenient". Gotta make the characters work for their bread and butter.
Thanks again.
Date: 25 Jan 2009 10:32 AM Title: Push
My favourite part of this first chapter is the thing that Alec lost in this situation. I've read a number of heat fits and not many of them comment on the loss of control and being taken over by their instincts.
Author's Response:
Hi. Thanks for reading and for reviewing. I always wished they'd explored more of this. They are humans with animal DNA and instincts - it can't be too pleasant in unusual circumstances.
Thanks again
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2008 10:23 PM Title: Push
This is an amazing story. It's so complex and emotional, but seems so true to the characters. Alec running seemed like it was something he really would have done after an encounter like that with Max. OC was great in her caring for Alec, like usual, she seemed like the only one. Please continue this story. Don't just leave us hangin'! Is Jondy going to get with Alec? Is Max and Logan? Please it's so damn good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words. I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.