Date: 25 Jul 2012 03:24 PM Title: Epilogue
Another really good one.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2009 01:54 AM Title: Epilogue
I did, I loved it!!! Even when he saw Max in the casino, I still didn't think she was the mystery man, I thought she just may have had the same idea as Alec, so I was completely enthralled!!!
And I love fluffy endings so I won't complain about it; I thought it was perfect :D
Date: 19 Jan 2008 09:26 PM Title: Epilogue
You should know that I absolutely adored this fic. Right down to the happy ending, well especially the happy ending. I'm sorry if I'm not making the most sense right now. Staying up this late does that to you :D
So... I kinda copy and pasted the important part of these reviews from fanfiction.net, but it was how I felt immediately after reading it so it probably has the most meaning. It is a very great story overall, I really did have fun reading this one!
Date: 19 Jan 2008 09:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
I totally had to come back and review here. I really liked your fic and figured you deserved the reviews. You definitely do by the way. Your work is always enticing to me and I appreciate that you share it. Why wouldn't I want to review for you? :D
Okay... so maybe I got super impatient and half a brain. I reviewed it on fanfiction.net too. It's funny how Alec makes Max yammer :P
Author's Response: You are the absolute sweetest, you know that? Your reviews always make me laugh, and always flatter. I am glad you like my stories. I am working on finishing Hope, so that I can finally move on to other DA fics. I have some ideas you see. MAybe something in which I am a little nicer to Logan. :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2008 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really liked this, Max being more like her season one self, and Alec all attitude like early season two, but put together. Very entertaining and heart wrenching, I must admit. And now with the waiting… :’( So sad. I’ll be waiting for that update!
Author's Response:
Well, like I said before you don't have to wait long. As soon as I hit send on this answer I will blitz the house and then be back to post the rest.
So never fear, teh wait will not be long.
Date: 05 Jan 2008 09:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Max definitely had me laughing with that spit pact. And the ever so devious Alec gets caught…
Author's Response: You are not the first person intrigued by the spit pact. I found it quite funny myself to be honest.
Date: 05 Jan 2008 09:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
“You have to forgive Cindy. She usually only plays strip poker.” Hehe that line was great. I loved Alec’s attack on ‘Suicidal’, simply hilarious. I am most impatient when I can see that there are more chapters to be read. So you will have to excuse my hastiness to get on with it.
Author's Response: That is fine. And I will put the rest up as soon as the house is all tidied up and I have some time to do so. Cause you see, this is finished. :)
Date: 05 Jan 2008 09:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well that figures. Haha, back to this? I had a niggling suspicion, but wasn’t ready to make terms with that suggestion that Max is the Mystery Man. Your writing is exquisite. Very detailed and figurative, two things I like very much. Seriously though, enough with this damn review… I got to find out what Alec’s gonna do about this all.
Author's Response: I am a big fan of detail and description, mainly because I am not sure my dialogue is really up to scratch. Added to that is the unconvenient fact that when I write I see it in my head like a film. Makes it very hard to put down in words, so the dialogue tends to get side-lined.
Date: 05 Jan 2008 09:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mystery Man huh? This should be some kind of great. I am undoubtedly excited for the plot to deepen... I mean it's got to be decent if fee_kh’s writing it :P No pressure :D
Author's Response: Hah! No pressure indeed. Thank you very much and as soon as I stop blushing I will answer the others.
Date: 05 Jan 2008 08:45 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting start, albeit extremely catchy, it was enough to convince me to read on.
Author's Response:
You humble me you know. Six reviews!!!!!! Six??? Thank you. So, I will answer one by one. Yes, the prologue is very short. It is a teaser after all, the only one I think I have ever written. It is very very short.
Glad it was enough to entice you to read on though.