[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 09:57 PM Title: The Pain in Her Ass
Very cool. Alec a gentleman, who would of thunk it? LOL
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:47 PM Title: The Pain in Her Ass
You know, I love Max, I do, but cluelessness drives me insane even more than outright bitchery sometimes. I think you could end my anger if you just wrote a sequel where she gets him the beer. Well, in this story anyway. I reserve the right to always be frustrated with Max if I so choose. :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 05:27 AM Title: The Pain in Her Ass
““Yeah?”r32;r32;“Alec, I need you to pick me up.””
I'm already happy.
He left sex for Max! Awww... but DAMN, poor 2C, I can't help feeling really bad for her. Not enough vibrators in the world. Son of a bitch!
““Well, the pavement was being a dick, so I had to teach him a lesson… with my face,” she quipped. “
Heh. So her.
No jokes?!? Jesus, she asks way too much of him.
““I don’t want a new one, Alec,” she told him with a murderous stare. “My bike is like… my baby! She’s my best friend! Do you think I could exchange Cindy if something ever happened to her? Do you think I could get a new you? What kind of person do you think I am?!””
AWWWWWW, I love how you tricked her into saying this to him! Awww! Perfect!
He got her bike back, I knew he would!
She better get him that beer. Stupid bitch.
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks for all your reviews, Sacrlet. I'm glad someone's reading these after so long. About the smut, well, I suck at it... I still haven't ever succesfully finished a smut scene, so, that's why all my stories are this way, always dodging the smut. :D
BTW, I see a looooot of anger towards Max... why so mean to Max?? She's just extreamly clueless!! Or that's how I decided to picture her ;)
Date: 19 Sep 2007 10:22 AM Title: The Pain in Her Ass
I liked it! loved the ending. :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2007 02:16 PM Title: The Pain in Her Ass
aaaawwwwww! I absolutely adored this MK! You did such a good job on this, and i think you even made me like Alec a little bit more, which is one heck of an accomplishment! :P
Though - as someone else mentioned, the formatting was all screwy. I took the liberty of fixing it for you, I hope thats ok!
Author's Response:
Well, CC, seeing as you've been having so many problems with this fandom and Max and Alec, I decided to make it my personal goal to make you fell in love with it again :)
Thanks for that!!! It took me like an hour to post on LJ, so I just posted it here and didn't even check how it looked like!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2007 02:40 AM Title: The Pain in Her Ass
Cool,
I love it. Drugged up Max was just hilarious.
And I really like that they will probably never mention it again.
You need to redo your formatting though, it has been shot to hell in the transfer. Makes it a bit difficult to read. Although the story was so gripping I persevered. :)
Author's Response:
thanks for the review... and crap!! I didn't notice that! It took me about an hour to post the story on LJ, ff.net, NWP and here... and LJ was being a complete bitch, so I kinda just posted it and went to sleep!!
Thanks!!