Date: 26 Nov 2013 03:20 AM Title: Much madness is Divinest Sense
love it looking forward to more
Date: 21 Oct 2008 03:49 PM Title: Much madness is Divinest Sense
This story is so beautifully written - there is a depth to the brokeness of Alec and Max that is poignant without being cloying or melodramatic.
I also very much love your portrayal of Cindy in this story - feisty, determined, and savagely caring. I loved both times she confronted Logan (the fact that he knew and didn't tell them - I had a visceral reaction; actually wanted to castrate him myself).
My favorite line so far is: "As she watched his expressive face run through a thousand emotions, she realised that she had always underestimated his ability to feel, maybe because he hid it so well. Yet now it was all there on his face for the world to see, his fear and anger, the love he felt for Max, the overwhelming grief he had for their children. It was almost too intimate to watch, but Cindy felt somebody had to bear witness."
I am interested to see how Max and Alec go about retrieving their lost child, and hope for their sakes that they get a happy ending. They so deserve one after all they've been through.
Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Especially in such detail. Of course it is nice to get one-liners like: Enjoyed this very much. It is just much more emotionally satisfying to get a well thought out review like this. So thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2008 12:52 AM Title: After great pain a formal feeling comes
Hey Fee dear. I loved this chapter. I really enjoyed you rchange in perspective to OC. I think it was a very smart move and much more fair to both characters. You could feel equal pain and despair from the both of them without the feelings of contempt aimed at one for not understanding the other and so on. Very, very smart choice there...so I'm quite pleased you didn't actually kill OC--that would've just been WAY too much trauma haha!
Oh, and I hate to say it, but who called it?! ME! hahaha j/k. Okay, so I shouldn't rejoyce at guessing correctly about the other twin's fate. It was terribly sad to read. I really felt for Max in this chapter. She just felt so guilty for not being able to protect her child and raise it and worrying about Alec condemning her after they just found each other again. Wonderful writing.
But I mean, I really and truly love Alec here too. He's quite lost with himself too. It's so very painful, and they're both so very internal. I'm really glad OC was there to throw them back into each other, especially since psy ops isn't there to throw them back togther.
Very well written darling. I loved every second of it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, and just a little note--While the story is fab, the formatting here is not easy on the eyes. I would suggest reformatting it without the bold and underlining. I know a lot of people get really easily turned off simply for formatting reasons, and I wouldn't want anyone missing out on this amazing fic for that reason!
Author's Response:
Yes, you did, didn't you. Good on you. And thanks for the head's up about the formatting. For some reason if the title was in bold it bolded everything else too. So now nothing is in bold. Aw well, them's the breaks.
Next chapter coming up today.
Date: 23 Sep 2007 05:08 AM Title: A Plank in Reason, broke
i read this a while ago on Fanfiction.net, i'm really glad your posting tit again, cant wait to see the finished version.
Author's Response:
Yeah. About that. No just kidding. I am posting the next chapter here today and then updating once a week. Have one other thing to finish first, but I finally have an idea on how to write the last two chapters. I knew what I wanted to write, just not how.
So keep your eyes peeled, will post the end here first in a few weeks.