[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 01:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ooo. Yes I like the subtext. And poor Alec scribbling furiously, scratching things out and starting again, unable to express himself when it really counted, despite his wont for conversation. Giving up his freedom and giving her hers in return. Love it.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 04:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done. Wouldn't mind seeing the fic expanded on a little.
Date: 12 Dec 2007 03:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was.. well, that was cool. A little bit sad, a little angsty but you write it so good that I don't really mind :)
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks. It is rapidly shaping up to be my favourite and then one day I might get the formatting fixed. All the discarded letters were supposed to be crossed out. You know so that it would be obvious they had been discarded.
Ah well I can dream, not too savvy where formatting is concerned. I am still learning the technical side of things.
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the kind words.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2007 02:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a price. Considering how much I believe Alec was secretly searching for a cause, I guess you could say he got his wish two fold. A new Manticore, something he knew how to do, something he was good at, and a way to finally repay Max. I loved this. Boy voting ain't going to be easy this month!
Author's Response: Thank you. i am glad you enjoyed it..
Date: 08 Sep 2007 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it... Subtext. It seems a forgotten concept, but I did get it, and I liked it. It wasn't until I finished the story that I realized the italic parts were Alec's try-out notes. I still am not sure from what point of view the story is told, but I really, really liked it. Kudos!
Author's Response: I actually tried to have bits of the notes crossed out to make it more obvious, but it wouldn't take my formatting. And the point of view? The apartment I suppose. :)
Date: 06 Sep 2007 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, first off - Yay for answering the prompt challenge! :D
Secondly, I can't speak for everyone, but i personally adore the format you used. It's something interesting and a bit different than the everyday story you find.
And as for the fic itself, while it of course made me sad :( it was very enjoyable to read and well written!
So, in conclusion: Lovely job! :D
Author's Response: THank you. Glad you like it. And you have no idea how much it means to see a review from this site. I always get nervous when I join a new archive, especially when it is specialised to one subject. You are making the transition very easy.