Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:50 PM Title: Favors
Too funny. And spot on with the characterizations.
Date: 24 Oct 2009 11:15 AM Title: Favors
Excellent fic, the humor in it was great! I love how Max knows exactly how to cheat the pay phone and how she's annoyed at Alec for popping her personal bubble. I also like how Max is thinking about how Alec hasn't exactly learned all the ropes of being on the Outside just yet. It's good to see that the transgenics who were thrown out into world aren't all perfectly adapted to it automatically, even Alec; I personally think that'd be a really rough experience. I really like how you've written both of them; they're completely in character. Pink python boots? Geez, he has everything, doesn't he? ^_~ Really amusing story and very well-written! Great job!
Date: 16 May 2009 11:54 AM Title: Favors
Haha, this was very funny and man was Alec acting totally dorky, which is adorable because I love dorks! And Ya know, it would be very interesting to meet Walter and see how it goes with M/A... *hint hint*