Date: 23 Sep 2007 02:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cute. People always assume if you're a good cook that you're a good at baking too. Completely different elements if you ask me. This was light and fun.
Date: 30 Aug 2007 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This review comes from a place of love...LOL.
Very sweet and funny and WAFF (love that term!)
Oh. Right. Like this would have been for anyone else...
-- adore that line. So funny, and I imagine what most men think when they stop to reflect on all the things they'll actually do for hot girls.
And you smeared a little chocolate on Logan, so you KNOW I'm on board...even though you left his clothes on. (sigh)
I guess this is proof that Logan can be superhot and straight and baking all at the same time. Thank goodness, I was *so* worried about that...
Date: 30 Aug 2007 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! It's sweet the things the ppl we love will do just because they care... :)
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 30 Aug 2007 08:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
hehe, logan caught in a kitchen disaster. never thought i'd see the story!
loved the fluff. very amusing to read.
Great job!
Date: 30 Aug 2007 05:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Don't know why and what it is about Logan baking at the moment, LOL. A running gag, or something? Hm, I'm kinda lost. But I definitely like it, Shy! Logan's choice of ingredients made me smile and imagining the status of his "kitchen kingdom" was really funny.
Favorite part:
--...Max watched him as he reeled off the names of her friends and co-workers, only one of whom he’d met. I did it for you, Max, she could see in his eyes. With a slow smile of understanding, she shrugged and asked, “well, so – what can I do?” ...
Yep, great answer to both challenges (how clever ;}). Excellent job. Thanks.
Date: 30 Aug 2007 05:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't care if Logan can bake or not. :P As long as he looks good doing it.
This is beautiful. So SWEET how he's doing it for Max, pretending its for Normal.
I love the S1-ness in the story.
xoxox