[Report This]Date: 31 May 2009 09:41 AM Title: MII: Shelf Life
This was fantastic!!! It was an idea that I wasn't sure was gonna work but you pulled it off and you had just the right amount of science to back up your theories - it could have been canon :D
I loved the ending and I was sad too that the characters weren't gonna be around anymore. They developed beautifully over the course of the story. You should be very proud of this! :D
Date: 31 Oct 2008 02:56 PM Title: MII: Cold War
Well, ask and you shall receive. I obviously didn't know when I wrote the review of the first Mission series that there already was a fic where Zane showed up at TC and Max found out that he and Alec knew each other before. And what a fic it is. The triple agentness of Zane, the brilliantness of Alec's plan, the reappearance of 529, all the plot details were excellently woven and kept coherent throughout. Mole sacrificing himself for Alec in the fight - poignant. And I liked that you didn't make a huge deal out of it - just wrote it in.
As always, excellent work. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2008 12:23 PM Title: MII : Learning of Alec
Gotta love Mole's humor here. This was an action packed chapter and had great pace to it! Your portrayal of 494 as a dangerous ubersoldier is made convincing here. Luckily Max had anticipated 494 taking the hard way or she may have needed more help!
Liked All Action Alec, cold calculating but unwilling to kill his "family" thus proving that lovable Alec really lurked within 494 all along.
My favorite part HAS to be Max being caught checking out Alec's ass!!!!! Too funny!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2008 12:10 PM Title: MII : Learning of Alec
I smell a plan coming together!!!!
So many funny lines in this - OC calling Alec "one tough oreo"- (perfect biscuit description for Alec by the way!) and Mole's exchange with Max.
Also liked"It's like beating my head against a cotton wall. No matter how long I do it, I don't make an impression" - Great stuff!!!
Can't wait to see Max's make the unflappable Alec mad .... let alone 494!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2008 12:01 PM Title: MII : Learning of Alec
Nice chapter, well constructed story. I like how you still portray Max as still being slightly reluctant to fully expose her feelings for Alec, though the fact she is speaking to Logan may explain this.
The idea of Alec using the defense mechanism that had served him so well at Manticore is clever. Where Max has had time to learn to adjust, Alec for all his street smarts, is still learning and has to now cope with the impending conflict between transgenic and Normals.
Story continues to rock !!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2008 11:46 AM Title: MII : Learning of Alec
Whoa.... I think I need to go be alone for a while LOL!!!!
You have given us exactly what we wanted here (I don't know about Max!!!!) this is a hot sensual and ruthlessly cold joining of these two characters. You really feel for Max as she finally lets her guard down and gives in to her feelings for Alec, and he responds to her vulnerability with such a cold calculating display.
Considerate of you to do the tamer version for younger readers or those wishing to avoid the gratuitous sex scenes! Me I'm sorry, I'm still imagining Alec's ass in those jeans.... your writing is inspiring!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2008 11:31 AM Title: MII : Learning of Alec
Tortured Alec - such a compelling read!!!! The change from Alec to X5-494 was chilling, but the build up was well plotted and written. Something has to be going wrong when Alec sends the girl away and Max admits to "crying on the space needle" - liked that image.
on to next chapter!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2008 11:21 AM Title: MII : Learning of Alec
I am loving this story, which exposes more of Alec's past than the show was given time to cover. This is my first review on this site and I have spent ages looking for your story again, as I did not review when I read it... but I am enjoying it too much not to!!!!!
Liked the idea that the X-5's behind Max were actually there for Alec - nice twist and makes sence as Mission in their world means so much and while Alec stayed at Manticore, Max baled.
Great job author.